'Two perfect tears seep out from under his closed eyes, trickling past his spiky lashes and down his deathly white cheeks....'
(#) JessicaAlexandra 2012-04-19 01:16:46 PMHi. :) Sorry to hear you feel like shit. That kinda sucks. Your writing is amazing as ever and I love the tidbit about Gerard drawing Frank. That's cute. -jumps up and down- now they can fall in love and live happily ever after. Yay! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Also sorry for the shitty review today, not really feeling like myself. But yeah, I still love it.
Author's responseYeah, it does kinda suck...thanks for the sympathy. Aww, I'm glad you liked the chapter- that really means a lot to hear right now :'D
Why aren't you feeling yourself? :/ And I always love your reviews- it really means a lot that you've stuck with this story :)
(#) LauraiSlaxl 2012-04-19 01:24:46 PMHey, I've never reviewed this before, but I've been reading it since the beginning, and it's literally my favorite story on Ficwad, and I love this chapter to bits; Gerard's vulnerable moment at the end was great, and when he called Frank "cute" in the car I almost squealed out loud. So yeah, please continue and don't delete this chapter, and I hope you stop feeling like shit soon!
Author's responseThank you so much for reviewing! I'm so happy it's your favourite- that means so much to hear :'D I'm glad you liked the chapter..I shall update soon, and thanks once again for taking the time to leave such a nice review :D
(#) CypherDetonation 2012-04-19 01:30:07 PMOh. My. God. That was absolutely amazing! I really don't understand how you can make the characters seem so real. It just completely amazes me. The chapter was a big risk, looking at the other chapters, but I'd say it was a good one. Most people tend to start rushing the relationship into the fifth chapter, and sometimes even earlier, but you're only hinting at a chance of a relationship at the nineteenth chapter. That's one of the things that makes this story feel so real. Another thing that's just amazing about this fanfic is that, with some characters, you just start out loving them or hating them, but your opinions change as the story goes on. I find myself forgiving Gerard, then wanting to slap him, and then forgiving him again. When I first started reading, I loved Ocean, but then I started to dislike her a bit. With most books, you have the exact same opinion of the character the entire way through, especially with fanfictions. In fact, I'd go so far as to say that this is one of the best I've ever read. I just can't find anything that needs to be changed. I really hope you feel better, though. I know that I probably could never really understand what you're going through, but if you ever want to talk, I'll listen.
Author's responseAhhhh, thank you so much! This made my night :'D I can't stop smiling, seriously, just thank you so god damn much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :'D
(#) ShadowSouls 2012-04-19 01:49:58 PMI'm glad you took this risk :D This chapter was beautiful in so many ways, and I'm glad things are starting to progress a little between Gerard and Frank. I'm more than a little pissed off at Ocean, blowing her best friend like that for Gerard. She's starting to get on my nerves actually, I used to like her. Now I don't think I do.
I hope you feel better and rid yourself of that shit feeling. If you need to talk or anything, I'm here and you can always mail me :) I'm a great listener, and I have the ability to cheer people up loads.
P.S: You are my favourite author on this site :D
Author's responseYay, glad you liked it! Thank you, that's really nice of you :)
Ahh, that's such a huge compliment! THANK YOU! xD
(#) ILoveGerardMCR 2012-04-19 01:51:40 PMYay, things are starting to get a teeny bit better between Frank and Gee.
I hope this story ends in frerard sex lol.
Author's responseThey are indeed :L
And it'll have a bit more of a plot than just frerard smut, but that doesn't mean there won't be any frerardyness...xD
(#) itshardtobeemo 2012-04-19 01:52:40 PMSO. FUCKIN. GREAT. I love the plot and this chapter was such a good risk to take! This is like my favourite story, I literally jumped up and down when I saw it had been updated XD I was sad to hear that you're not continuing Strike a Violent Pose but I totally get that you've got other stories you're working on, oh and that annoying little thing called life haha xx
Author's responseTHANK YOU! :'D Aww, you've made me smile so much- I'm so glad you like this! Hahaha, yeah..life takes up a lot of my time :L
(#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-19 02:10:49 PMOh My God, this was seriously the tits. Not even gonna lie, this made me all happy :') Even though its a sad chapter, it made me smile when Gee and Frankie were getting along, even if Gee was covered in vomit. Which is always a delight :L
Update again soon??
Author's responseThank yooou :') Hahaa, yes, being covered in vomit always makes for good times :L
I'm about to start work on the next update...thanks so much for reviewing!
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-04-19 02:12:04 PMThis chapter was AMAZING!!! Poor Gerard, I hope Danny doesn't get to him "/ Ocean is just getting nasty now, she needs to sort it out :P. Frank, comfort Gerard some more!!!!! Make him lurve you!!! Update another amazing chapter soon please :P
Author's responseThank yooou!! :'D I know, I feel pretty bad for Gerard right now...anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to review- I shall update sooon!
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-04-19 02:16:24 PMThis was the best chapter ever :D I love how Gerard's finally softening up (or is just really drunk) XD It's like perfectly Frerard-tastic :3 Update soon, this is such an awesome story!
Author's responseThank you so much :'D I shall update soon!