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My Revenge (You Win)

by DisenchatedDestroya 2 Reviews

"Don’t underestimate the ones crying in pain." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/20 - Updated: 2012/04/20 - 256 words - Complete

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  • My Revenge (You Win)

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-20 08:19:20 AM

    How are you so god damn amazing? This was fucking BRILLIANT! I really empathized with it and the language was perfect and you used it so adeptly. I swear each poem I read of yours just gets better and better. Seriously- I'm not just saying that.

    I'd pick a favourite line, but then I'd have to quote the whole poem.

    CosmicZombie xo

    Author's response

    Aw, thank you sooooo much! Reading your reviews always make me smile; you really are lovely about my work!

    Thanks! :D
  • My Revenge (You Win)

    (#) MikeyFuckinWay 2012-04-20 08:54:19 AM

    That was actually really good! I don't usually like reading poetry like this but this was... this was good. Very relatable.

    Author's response

    Thank you very much! Glad you found it relatable. :D

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