"They’re both as bad as each other." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-21 03:56:15 PMThis sucked? Yeah, and I lost my virginity to Ryan Ross. This was perfect; it was sadorable, it had Gertrick, it had Pikey, it had a fight scene, it had wise Patrick Stump. When Pete said that Sweetness was sleeping, I literally exclaimed "FUCKING ADORABLE!" and got odd looks from my dog. This chapter was awesomely long too! You're a great writer and this is a kick-ass story. Hope you update soon!
Author's responseYou lost your virginity to Ryro?! You lucky, lucky girl. ;P
Thank you very much! I'm glad you saw the glimmers of Gertrick in there, I wasn't sure if I made enough of it for it to actually register. It definitely did have a wise Patrick Stump; he is the god of all knowledge. ;)
I'll try my best to update later today/tonight.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-21 04:48:08 PMOkay. This is just unbelievable! I love it! I'm addicted. Firstly, the plot is really really good. And I can really see both sides of Gerard and Pete's argument against each other But you really did excellent with this chaper being in Patricks POV. It really showed how fair and reasonable he is. He's not taking anyone's side but Mikey who is the only innocent one (apart from himself!). I also loved how you showed that both Gerard and Pete were in the wrong with what they and how fast Patrick was to notice this. Also at the beginning, I really saw how emotionally hurt Gerard really is as well as Mikey. And I think this really adds to the Gertrick which I think is really interesting and quite a different pairing but I love it all the same. A brilliant BRILLIANT job and it most definitley didn't suck! Please do update again because I just can't get enough! (I'm not sure if alot of that made sense...) :)
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm very glad that you like this story!
I'm pleased that you could see both sides of the argument despite it being in Patrick's POV. Patrick is definitely the most reasonable/normal one out of the four main characters, he just tries to help and do what is right by the innocent party. It's nice to know that came across alright. :)
Yeah, both Way brothers are emotionally hurt and I'm relieved that came through alright. As I am with the fact that the Gertrick was actually noticable and didn't go over the reader's head.
I'll try my best to update today/tonight.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :D
- Patricks point of view was darling. Because you were seeing it from a kind of unbiased opinion that knew both Pete and Gerard. I noticed a little Gertrick, so sweet. Gerard needs to realize that his brother can have more people in his life. Pete needs to respect Gerard, because his Mikey's brother. They both need to stop thinking that everything they think it's right. They both need to chill, think things through, and see from a different perspective other than their own. Amazing chapter... Truely and undeniably perfect. Patrick was such a mom towards the end. In fact he just reminds me of my moms personality mixed with my best friend, B.
That was kinda the idea behind having Patrick's POV; he is pretty much a neutral character, as in he's not taking sides but simply doing what he thinks is right.
I'm glad you noticed the tiny ray of Gertrick! I think I'm gonna try and dot it around a little more in the oncoming chapters.
Gerard definitely does need to realize that Mikey's can have someone other than him, just as Pete needs to have a little respect for Gerard.
Yep; Patrick was certainly a bit of a mum in this! I kinda view him as the most matriarchal character.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) LatherTheBlood 2012-04-22 05:11:48 AMThis story is perfect. No arguing, it has everything you'd ever want, it has awesome, kick ass pairings (Gertrick and Pikey ftw.) It has violence (Poor Pete btw, he's just being a little sweety and then Gee being the protective little amazing big brother he is punches him) It makes you feel sympathy for poor Mikey because of the brilliant way you've written it. It's amazing, i love it. Literally one of my favourites on this site. I can't wait for your next update, I look forward to reading it. Sorry about not reviewing every chapter, sometimes i forget :3
Thank you for making this story amazing.
Author's responseThank you very much!
I'm extremely glad that you like the pairings as I wasn't too sure about Gertrick. Haha, pleased you liked the violence! :D
Don't worry about not reviewing; just the fact that reviewed once is enough to make me more than happy!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D