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Fall Back Together

Harry goes to Hoggy Hoggy Hogwarts at last

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Dumbledore, Harry, Professor McGonagall, Snape - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2006/07/02 - Updated: 2006/07/03 - 2268 words

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• Rise Up to Your Fate

  (#) Dark_Mage 2006-07-03 01:08:05 AM

  Just a small question. How can you sit at the head of a round table when there is no head? If that were possible then the knights of the ROUND table who were seen as equals, wouldn't have become a legend...
  
  UPDATE SOON, this was pretty good!

• Rise Up to Your Fate

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-07-03 06:27:11 AM

  Harry's quite enigmatic. I look forward to seeing how he reacts to everyone, not to mention how everyone reacts to him. I'm glad to see that you've begun to write longer chapters, it's quite a nice change.
  
  Looking forward to the next chapter.

• Rise Up to Your Fate

  (#) darkov 2006-07-03 08:41:30 AM

  Good chapter. Harry seems to be a bit well Albus like. The way he acts clumsy to hide his power is the same way Albus acts old to hide his. Update soon.

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  (#) lantana 2006-07-03 11:51:18 AM

  Just discovered this - and raced through the 3 chapters. This is great, I'll add this to my alerts, wouldn't risk missing a chapter! oh, about the pairing: any chances on slash??

  Author's response

  I did seriously consider making the main pairing slash... I also considered making Harry totally emo, I decided against it. There will probably be slash (femslash or otherwise) but it won't be the main thing. Of course, that doesn't mean Harry won't flirt with the guys!

• Rise Up to Your Fate

  (#) amac_1688 2006-07-03 12:04:40 PM

  enough hardware on him?
  
  exactly how powerful is he

  Author's response

  One can never have enough hardware. Hopefully you'll see how powerful he is in the next chapter.

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  (#) wolff 2006-07-03 10:52:26 PM

  "Dumbledore wasn't sure of exactly when, just knew that he did."
  
  This sentence doesn't work. At all. The "just knew that he did" doesn't fit with the sentence before, and I don't really have any suggestions for a change. I don't think it's a critical enough sentence that you can't just delete it and move on.
  
  " and a pair of well worn converse sneakers." Converse should be capitalized, since it is a brand name.
  
  ""Oh good, I here Hogwarts food is some of the best."" I think the word you wanted was "hear". "Here" is a place, to "hear" is to listen. Homophones catch a lot of people up.
  
  " black dragon hide wand holster on his left fore arm" forearm is one word.
  
  All in all, not a bad start for a story. I look forward to reading more.

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  (#) slashslut 2006-07-04 03:22:13 PM

  im very curious to see how this harry will differ from cannon (though the knives and pistols are definitely a big clue:)

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  (#) MaD_hAtTer 2006-07-04 06:14:43 PM

  sweeeet. i wonder how harry got those guns and how he grew up.

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  (#) Darthbob 2006-07-06 10:01:27 AM

  Would the inspiration for this story happen to have come from Sin City?

  Author's response

  It did infact. Was I that obvious? Then again, anyone who's seen the movie can see the similarities. But I think out of all the movies I could have chosen for inspiration, that was one of the best. Of course...Dogma is also rather inspiring for me, but I decided I'm not going to piss off too many catholics just yet.

• Rise Up to Your Fate

  (#) pheonix_iceangel 2006-07-10 03:54:28 AM

  hiya
  cool so far
  can't wait for you to update the story
  so update soon!!
  
  Thanks
  
  Pheonix

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