Coffee and conversation in the staff rest room. (Um. I feel the need to clarify that this is not the US usage of "restroom", and they aren't actually having a coffee break in the toilets. Not even...
(#) Roadstergal 2006-09-21 01:06:32 PMVery nice characterization, in-character dialog, great Laura-thoughts. I'll rate it when I have points again.
My only critique, and it's a niggly one, is that the "Take it from me, Mrs Brittas, they're not," is several paragraphs after what it's referring back to, and it confused me for a moment. I'd be less confused if it were "Take it from me, Mrs Brittas, they're not worth it." As I said, niggly. Great story.