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9 - Honest Mistake

Because we all make mistakes.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/25 - Updated: 2012/06/20 - 3502 words

Reviews

• I May Be Blind, But I See More Than You Know

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-25 01:13:06 AM

  I happen to have wonderfully timing... Look at what I stumbled upon, a great masterpiece!
  
  This entire chapter sent chills through my body. When Ryan and Spencer were whispering, to when Spencer just calls her out on it and Brendon telling her that it wasn't advice. It was filled with such emotion.
  I like that you're repeating stuff about her family, btw. It makes the information sink in and it seems to make it mean more, if you know what I mean.
  
  Crazy arrival scene! I loved it. You're making Spencer my favorite. Slowly he's growing on me, more and more.

  Author's response

  Blushes Aww... look! You're making me blush! :3
  
  Wow. Sometimes I worry that there's never enough emotion, but I guess that this review just reassured me. But yes, all such sad parts. There is gonna be more sad (well, sad-ish) parts coming though. Then we'll get to the happy Loucer stuff. XD
  
  Thanks, and again, like the emotion stuff, that just reassured me that it's going alright. I mean, I just thought that it would have gotten a bit monotonous, but maybe it's not so bad because I've spread the updates to once every two weeks.
  
  Yes! There's always gotta be a crazy arrival scene. Yay for Spencer being your favourite; he's my favourite in this story too! (Apart from Yankee, but he's a dog, so that doesn't really count, unfortunatly...)

• I May Be Blind, But I See More Than You Know

  (#) wayuphighify 2012-04-25 07:45:18 PM

  THIS IS PERFECT BECAUSE I LOVE THIS.
  Oh my gosh, poor Lou! -tear- At least the boys got her back. Where is Yankee now though?
  I love all the boys in this story! You made them so nice! Ah!
  Thanks for keeping me from horrible biology homework- this satisfies me greatly. WRITE MORE PLEASE! :)

  Author's response

  Perfect? Wow! blushes Thank you very much!
  
  Yes, yay for the Panic! boys! XD I could so see them rocking the superhero thing. ;)
  
  Yankee is with Chris. Remember how he went to look for her in the car before calling Spencer to ask him and the boys to look for her? Yeah, he took Yankee with him. He comes back in the next chapter though.
  
  Really? Aw, well, I just kinda wrote them as how I imagined them, and I hate the whole 'Let's focus on Brendon and Ryan' thing, so I've decided I'm going to share the spotlight around.
  
  Ha, I'm sorry to distract you. Though if it's horrible... I've never distracted someone from homework before. You're my first! XD I've written up to chapter 12 - the story's really flowing - so of course there's going to be more, but you'll have to wait until... counts in head the 9th of April until the next update. Sorry. :(

• I May Be Blind, But I See More Than You Know

  (#) Ckid11 2012-04-27 07:48:46 AM

  I love it I cant wait for the next chapter

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying this. :)

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