Or atleast in this household they do. A young a boy, Peter is having deadly nightmares aswell as his elder sister, Anna, she hasn't shown any sign of fear towards these nightmares although her brot...
(#) syphonycometh 2006-07-03 09:21:20 AMI am so sorry that I am the first one to review you, it seems you've had this story out for quite some time (A day is too long without a review, am I right?) I don't know if its just that my peers give me stories similar to your grammar and me just nice. You were giving an example of what Anna did on daily basis right? Just check the grammar and spelling. I'm curious on how your skills and your story grows from here. Overall, I'd give it a 7.5 out of 10! Good luck out there!
Author's responseThank-you so much and yes I'm with you on my poor grammer skills. I hope to further develop them so they are up there with my spelling skills which seem to be pretty high. And thank-you for the rating aswell. I will be working on the next chapter/page soon.
- That was awful Marvin, absoultly awful! LOL! I lubs you Marvin. It's interesting I lub it! Update soon or I'll poke you with my pencil!
Author's responseWhy thank you my dear friend xD I'll update soon and don't worry there'll be edits of this chapter lol xD I'll get better hopefully. ^^ This story can be my camouflage from your pencil ^^