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4- Even Family Falls Apart

Kassidy ripped her arm from my grasp, tears threatening to fall from her eyelashes.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/27 - Updated: 2012/04/27 - 1461 words

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• Forbidden Desires

  (#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-27 12:29:31 AM

  This chapter was just full of heartbreak and emotion. :'( So sad.
  
  I honestly can't think of anything else to say. It was brilliant. Despite the fact of the main theme - incest - you are actually a good writer, and that can mean the difference between a fic with a questionable theme turning out good or bad. So far, I'd say it's good.
  
  I loved Brendon's fat cat. XD and the way he decided to piss the neighbors off by practicing louder to get back at them. :D
  
  And, like before, I will be waiting for the next chapter.

  Author's response

  Aw, thank you. That really does mean a lot. :D
  
  lol I loved throwing that in!
  
  I'll try to update soon. Again, thank you so much for your feedback!

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