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Goodnight, Sweet Nightmares

by DisenchatedDestroya 2 Reviews

"Can I teach you a lesson in death?" Feedback hugely appreciated. :)

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/30 - Updated: 2012/04/30 - 198 words - Complete

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  • Goodnight, Sweet Nightmares

    (#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-04-30 01:56:03 PM

    I really liked it. And I hate reading poetry. I cannot fucking stand it most of the time. But this; I liked it.

    Author's response

    Thank you very much; I'm extremely glad you liked it! :D

    Thank you very much; I'm extremely glad you liked it! :D
  • Goodnight, Sweet Nightmares

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-03 11:27:21 AM

    This has to be one of my favourite poems out of the ones you've written...I really felt I could connect with it, and the last verse? Pure brilliance, honey. Seriously, the whole thing was great- the repetition worked really well, and you wrapped it up very effectively.
    Thank you so much for sharing this!

    CosmicZombie xo

    P.S. Sorry to hear you aren't feeling happy :/ hope you're feeling better soon, and if you ever need to talk to someone, feel free to send me an email :)

    Author's response

    Really?! Thank you! I'm glad you thought it connectable; I try to write stuff that people can relate to, so it's really nice to hear you think that. Thank you so soooo much for leaving such a kind and friendly comment; it really does mean a hell of a lot to me. :)

    Really?! Thank you! I'm glad you thought it connectable; I try to write stuff that people can relate to, so it's really nice to hear you think that. Thank you so soooo much for leaving such a kind and friendly comment; it really does mean a hell of a lot to me. :)

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