Random oneshot, kind of half-sequel (only not at all, really) to Respect. JayOC pairing. The OC doesn't suck, for the record.
Ok, the crickets and I love it, we are J/T and N/T fans, so we really like it, its early, we haven't had caffeine, we are not as crazy, I will try to type you up a better review later.
(#) Arisey 2006-07-04 07:54:05 AM
Nice job, but could you have explained about the new girl more? Like, who is she related to, how did she come to join the group, and such. I don't really like new characters, but this was a good story!
(#) kelseyANNE 2006-07-08 12:36:34 AM
you already know that i love this.
thank you for writing it for me.
and i'm glad that you don't think she sucks, i hate mary sues or gary stews, so...i try my best not to make them.
(#) amanda 2006-07-25 04:09:34 PM
I really liked it plz continue it!!!!!! Even if you didnt like the story line because it was your friends idea, you did a good job of it and it felt like you could really understand the characters and who they really were.
(#) dana 2006-07-28 10:05:01 AM
that did not make sense.
Haha, at least you're honest about it. No, I don't expect it would. A friend requested I write her a story about her character and Jay, so I did. I didn't bother writing exposition or a background, because it's really only there for her. Look at it this way: if FicWad was Deviant-Art, this would be in Scraps. :)
(#) CotT Lover!! 2006-08-18 11:16:58 AM
i liked it it was something new and it was weird but in a good way but i was kinda confused about that new girl