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Rivers and Reality

These patterns of nature, These cruel, heartless cycles, They only reflect what we have done.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/05/12 - Updated: 2012/05/12 - 277 words - Complete

Reviews

• Rivers and Reality

  (#) dobbysock123 2012-05-16 10:28:20 AM

  Why do you have to be such a good poet??? WHY I SO EMO WHEN I WRITE POETRY??? this is so good, luv you and your writing. MOAR? ADDED 2 FAVOURITES xx

  Author's response

  AWW THANKS SO MUCH DAHLING XDD i love you too (: gndflkgjndfkgjndslkfgnsldkg this made my day thank you so so so much
  
  lina xo

• Rivers and Reality

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-22 10:01:37 AM

  Wow O_O that was SO good! Like...Eeech. I'm kinda speechless. Loved your comparison of Rivers and reality; it worked really well, and I just loved it all. This was my favourite verse:
  'This river is just like you or me,
  Washed out by society,
  Destroyed by reality.
  Drip fed with toxic lies
  With venom filled kisses
  And midnight black promises
  Of some intangible end.'
  
  God. Goosebumps! :'D You're really good at poetry. Keep Writing!
  
  CosmicZombie xo

• Rivers and Reality

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-22 10:01:37 AM

  Wow O_O that was SO good! Like...Eeech. I'm kinda speechless. Loved your comparison of Rivers and reality; it worked really well, and I just loved it all. This was my favourite verse:
  'This river is just like you or me,
  Washed out by society,
  Destroyed by reality.
  Drip fed with toxic lies
  With venom filled kisses
  And midnight black promises
  Of some intangible end.'
  
  God. Goosebumps! :'D You're really good at poetry. Keep Writing!
  
  CosmicZombie xo

  Author's response

  Thank you so much!! thanks for reading and y'know, actually having a favourite bit!! this really means a lot to me! thanks for reviewing also!!...just THANK YOUUUUU!!
  
  lina xo

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