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I'm trapped. Caught in my own grotesque world. And phantasmagoria swims behind my eyelids
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-22 10:05:41 AMThat was so beautiful. Morbid and beautiful and really dark, but I think that was what made it beautiful...if that makes any sense? I absolutely loved the language you used- amazing. This has to be one of my all-time favourite poems, seriously. Favourite-ed xD
Keep writing, you're very talented, honey :)
Author's response:'D really?!?!?!?!?! all that is coming out of my mouth at the moment are retarded squeaks of speechlessness and shock... asdlkfhasdlkfjhsldkfj THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! i can't even breathe!!
(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2012-06-12 02:15:16 PMThis was...wow. The way it just went together was really beautiful. And i could just see it...if that makes any sense? But I felt really very connected to it.
I absolutely loved it.Would it be okay if I printed a copy so I can have it to read when I'm not on the computer?
Don't worry, I won't without your permission. :)
Author's responseadslfjahdslfkajsbflidgbadigbadfilgabliagbdligbadlgkbadgkljb sldkjgbasodghabsogibsdf AWW REALLY?!?!
AHAA THANK YOU SO MUCH!! SURE PRINT IT! GO AHEAD! AWW THIS REALLY MADE MY WEEK!! XDD I THINK I LOVE YOU!! you are a wonderful, wonderful person (:
tbh, i can't see why y'all like this... it's kinda... morbid... but THANK YOU!!