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Blood Soaked Paradise
4 ReviewsI'm trapped. Caught in my own grotesque world. And phantasmagoria swims behind my eyelids
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Blood Soaked Paradise
(#) RyukStoleMahApplesDx 2012-05-16 02:38:19 PM
Beautiful, I must say.Author's response
thanks brah (:
lina xo -
Blood Soaked Paradise
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-22 10:05:41 AM
That was so beautiful. Morbid and beautiful and really dark, but I think that was what made it beautiful...if that makes any sense? I absolutely loved the language you used- amazing. This has to be one of my all-time favourite poems, seriously. Favourite-ed xD
Keep writing, you're very talented, honey :)
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
:'D really?!?!?!?!?! all that is coming out of my mouth at the moment are retarded squeaks of speechlessness and shock... asdlkfhasdlkfjhsldkfj THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! i can't even breathe!!
lina xo -
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(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2012-06-12 02:15:16 PM
This was...wow. The way it just went together was really beautiful. And i could just see it...if that makes any sense? But I felt really very connected to it.
I absolutely loved it.Would it be okay if I printed a copy so I can have it to read when I'm not on the computer?
Don't worry, I won't without your permission. :)
xx, a.Author's response
adslfjahdslfkajsbflidgbadigbadfilgabliagbdligbadlgkbadgkljb sldkjgbasodghabsogibsdf AWW REALLY?!?!
AHAA THANK YOU SO MUCH!! SURE PRINT IT! GO AHEAD! AWW THIS REALLY MADE MY WEEK!! XDD I THINK I LOVE YOU!! you are a wonderful, wonderful person (:
tbh, i can't see why y'all like this... it's kinda... morbid... but THANK YOU!!
lina xo -
Blood Soaked Paradise
(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2012-06-12 02:16:40 PM
sorry--the 'felt really very' was just supposed to be 'felt very'
:S
xx, a.