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"I like making it wrong." LYRICS. Heavily inspired by Cobra Starship. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-05-19 10:06:58 AMThat was so good! Really, really liked it; especially the chorus and the middle bit- it flowed just perfectly for a song and I had goosebumps by the end! xD This bit had to be my favourite; 'This is a cry,
For the kids
To fly.' That bit just really spoke to me :'D Keep up this amazing work- your stories/poems/songs are always a joy to read :)
Author's responseThank you very, very much! I wasn't too sure if the middle bit worked with the rest of it, so it's really reassuring to know you think it flowed alright.
Thanks again! :D