(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-05-22 09:27:27 AMHaha, maybe you should do character intros! Like, describe a bit of the character and their relationship with the guys. What is the plot of the story so far? Or have you got one?
Author's responseyeah, it is going to start when they are in high school, im probably going to do character profiles. thankyou ;)
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-05-22 09:34:05 AMTry a Shawshank Redemption thing, that's normally effective. "I remember the first time I saw Frankie. Standing sticking out like a sore black thumb amongst all the blonde and orange of the school.' I dunno, something like that. I like to start with a description of the setting or one of the characters yelling at another.
Author's responsethank you so much, your a life saver :3