Lou has another run in with a security guard, which leaves her a little worse for wear. More bonding with the band, and an insightful conversation with someone.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-05-23 07:52:34 AMSeriously? I'm hating security guards right now. That dude was a first class jerk.
Ahh, it was Brendon! I couldn't even guess that it was Brendon! : D
I loved this update, like always. I just love reading each direction this story seems to take and I love that you're taking it slow, and they aren't already dating or making out lol.
Author's responseHah, yeah... I didn't plan on her to get hurt; it just sort of happened. Whoops. Anyway.
I think that most people didn't pick that it was Brendon. I mean, people just go, 'Ryan = guitar, Brendon = singing,' but I don't think they realised or remembered that Brendon use to play guitar as well on Camisado and Nails. In the '06 tours, anyway.I didn't want it to be too obvious, but I guess I wasn't of everybody thought it was Ryan.
Thank you! Yeah, I know what you mean. I hate stories where people know each other for like, a day and then they're all over each other. I guess it's that part of me showing through, plus my characterization of Spencer (making him shy when it comes to that stuff) and Lou (making her always second guess people because she's blind and she's dealt with people excluding her and stuff).
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-05-23 01:45:42 PMSecurity guards stink.
BRENDON MESSED UP!?!?!??!! To be honest I thought it was Ryan. Hmmm. Well we all are wrong every once in awhile.
Can't wait for more!
Author's responseHah, agreed. :D
I know, that seemed like the obvious choice, but nope! It was Brendon. Just thought I'd out that little twist in there. XD
It's comments like that last one of yours that spur me on to write more. :) Next update in two weeks. Sorry. That might make you impatient.
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-05-23 04:24:45 PMNo, I can deal, I have been writing my own fic. right now it's seven chapters long and unable to get posted. I don't know why!!!
Author's responseOooh, really? I'm intrigued. What's it about???
Ah, one of the girls who I beta stories for, had the same problem with a one shot I looked over for her.
(#) Heymimusic 2012-05-23 07:40:45 PMHooray for updates! :D
This just gets better and better by the chapter. And I love the fact that it's going slow, too, and not breezing by like roadrunner from that cartoon xD. And nice twist with Brendon, I have the live in Denver, so I knew he played in Nails and Camisado, but I was still expecting it to be Ryan because of the subject of the song.
Looking forward for what's in store! :)
Author's responseYay for reviews! XD
Aw, thank you! Yeah, I'd never be able to write a story (let alone a romance) where they're like, dating after a day and fucking after three. That's just unbelievable in my eyes. As if it would happen like that in real life.
Ha, thanks! I downloaded all the video clips and audio versions... Hehe... Yeah. So not obssessed or anything. shifty look I know. But I didn't want to make it Ryan-centric, so I just thought, 'Yup, let's make it Brendon; no one will see it coming and she's right in front of him anyway. I'll just pretend Ryan was off on the other side of the stage doing... Something.' Yeah. My mind's weird. XD But the subject of the song comes into play in the next chapter. I didnt want to, but eh. I have. So watch out for that conversation. wink wink, nudge nudge
(#) XEvil_AngelX 2012-06-02 01:59:44 PMI just read this all in one sitting (which is rare for me; I can never sit still) but yeah!
Love triangle? ahhhhhh I love this, please for the love of god update
Author's responseWow, really? XD I'm glad that by reading this I was able to take away your fidget-y-ness. Pff. Okay, that was kinda a random thing to say, but eh.
Love triangle?!?! Between WHO, may I ask? I mean, obviously Lou and Spencer, but who else is in there? (And just for the record: no, there will be no love triangle. Ha, whoops, maybe I wrote the boys TOO nice...)
Patience, my friend! Update is this Wednesday! And then you're gonna have to wait until... The 20th. I update every second week.
Thank you so much for reviewing!