Patrick makes Devin waffles and runs an embarrasing erand for her
(#) moocow 2006-07-06 02:22:49 AM
haha I love the way I rated it...
(#) Tinsley 2006-07-06 07:44:09 AM
I really liked it. It was sad but yet had some humor to it as well. I hope that you keep writing! I can't wait to read more!
thank you, i'm glad you like it. yes, i will keep writing more :)
(#) crazyfan 2006-07-06 09:31:51 AM
WRITE MORE NOW!!! thank you!
i'll take that to heart and add a couple more chapters today :)
(#) molliegym 2007-03-21 05:57:40 AM
When Pat said, "I'll go get one of mine"... for a second, I thought he meant he would go get one of his bras. Then I realized it was a tshirt =)
And I, too, like those girls in the store, would have probably giggled pretty hard if I saw Pat buying feminine products.
Great chapter =)