If he needs saving then you're the one to do it.
(#) c-o-c-a-i-n-e 2012-06-01 04:05:40 AMActually, you're better than you think you are at writing smut.
This chapter is so perf I think I'm going to go die in a hole now.
Author's responseWell thank fuck for that. I was actually sitting at the computer with two fingers down my throat. But if it the product's alright then I guess it was worth it!
(#) KilljoyLlamaLove 2012-06-01 04:28:30 AMthat was amazing.
holy crap, you're awesome.
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! AHHH I ALMOST DIED FROM THE WAIT. totally worth it though!
Mmmmm that was a good ending c:
good job, your smut was perfect!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
thank you, again, for updating.
you're so talented n_n
Author's responseAha thank you! Glad it was worth the unforgiveable wait :3 Talented? I don't think so...I just write down whatever comes to mind. Obviously I have a very open mind.
- That... Was awesome... Like WICKED chapter...
There was everything you could want in a chapter. You are amazing... Now update as soon as you can, us bored vampire wannabes are out for blood. (I'm saying that for emphasis, I'm more of a superhero villain thing, with the mind reading and invisibility and such.. How'd I get so off topic?, whatever, bye bye now (: )
Author's responseEverything you could want in a chapter? I had a huge debate myself on whether or not I should add the cyborg strip teasers. o.O
- Wow... Amazing! =D
Your actually really good at writing smut! I can't write smut so your one stage of writing further than me! =D
Can't wait for the next update! =D
Author's responseYeesh. I was writhing in discomfort. You should have seen me crying and screaming "why God, why must zee children want zee secks?!" I guess it's not too difficult if you put your mind to it...wait, that sounds horrible. :/
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-06-01 09:28:08 AMinto the field models sometimes use to shoot photos and farmers sometimes use to shoot homosexuals.
I'm not sure if spilling beans all over myself was a normal reaction to this line but I think it was a positive one.
I'm going to have to come (cum) back and read the smut at a later date because my Nan's down and she keeps coming in and offering me food and stuff and I can't read smut when my Nan's talking to me but I'm sure you don't have to be too self conscious because the almost-smut making-out from the last chapter was super awesome so
And the whole Twilight bit was killing me Oh god I think I love you.
Author's responseYuhuh I had to send my sister out of the room while I was writing this. She's 13 for Chrissake, she should still be playing with Cindy dolls!
Love ya too! ;)