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The last of all the rides he takes [MUSIC AND WORDS]

by aweirdtree 4 Reviews

The sense of something ending lingered in the air.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2012/06/05 - Updated: 2012/06/05 - 671 words - Complete

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  • The last of all the rides he takes [MUSIC AND WORDS]

    (#) MissAbbieHudson 2012-06-05 02:39:24 PM

    I love it! and I totally get how it ties into the song! :D it's just amazing xoxoxoA

    Author's response

    why thank you :D i'm glad you like it ^^ and nice to know it makes even some kind of sense, or something :D
  • The last of all the rides he takes [MUSIC AND WORDS]

    (#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-06 05:57:05 AM

    I really liked this- it was very evocative and I could almost feel the rain on my skin as Gerard waited. I also loved how you made it feel so much in the moment by not explaining much about Frank or Gerard- it fitted the storyline perfectly, like, leaving their past and explanations and everything behind; it was just them, driving off to new beginnings. And this was awesome- 'thousand rainy Sundays and the best part of your favorite song'.

    Really great. I loved it. Thanks so much for participating!

    CosmicZombie xo

    Author's response

    thank you! so very much (: i wasn't so sure about it and i still think it could be better but nice to know you liked it anyway :D your opinion means a lot ^^ and thanks for inventing such a thing! :D
  • The last of all the rides he takes [MUSIC AND WORDS]

    (#) Jacks_Demons 2012-06-06 03:02:07 PM

    I laiiik it :D It was really descriptive! I love the image of the car on the horizon, I could see it in my mind, the yellow lights illuminating the grey rain... I love it :)

    Author's response

    thank you ^^ great to hear you like it (:
  • The last of all the rides he takes [MUSIC AND WORDS]

    (#) OutForTheCount 2012-06-11 01:31:53 PM

    Lovely :) I imagine this to be them leaving the loathed Battery City before it gets too bad, for some reason... Also, I think you captured the mood I get into while listening to the song quite well, I always think of rainy days when I hear it... Well done! :D

    Author's response

    mwaaaah, thank you :D and maybe that is what it is about, maybe it's not... i'm not that sure myself, really :D just, fuck, thanks!

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