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The Night Before
57 ReviewsThe night before Bill and Fleur's wedding was one that Harry would remember vividly for a long time...
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The Night Before
(#) coolme_83 2010-11-30 05:15:34 AM
What??
You just left it like that....
Both the Harry/Fleur smut and the actual story is half written.
You should have completed atleast one of them.....
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The Night Before
(#) Kirijama 2011-01-12 01:45:14 PM
Great start to a story... but too bad it doesn't seem like it'll ever be finished -
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(#) Basilisk1 2011-04-29 07:25:42 PM
I just took a look at locatha's review and agree...with someone that powerful who needs to worry about a half-breed construct ?? And Lucius is (in canon anyway) a strong duelist but a witch that can take out an entire building of wizards... TIME TO LEAVE THE COUNTRY!!! -
The Night Before
(#) Shadowevar 2011-12-09 05:38:37 PM
This story definitely needs to continue. I see all kinds of fun here. -
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(#) GBTtown 2012-07-05 05:56:49 AM
To borrow Genericrandom5's description, "A disturbingly awesome story", I really thought you packed a lot of plot in short amount of verbiage. I disagree that it needs "more". One reviewer mentioned, to paraphrase, the wholesale slaughter and without Voldie's help, well wake up and smell an original plot for a change. Even in canon (praise be to the almighty JKR up until Book 6) it was the Deeters doing most of the killing.