FicWad

Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > All the Lies in the Books

Reviews

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) BulletproofNinja 2012-06-07

  I like what you did here. The fact that you've given us a list of what they'll have to go through will help us get into the story more. Nice one, can't wait for an update! xo

  Author's response

  Thank you. I was going to finish and make it one longish chapter, but I'm kind of struggling with how I'm putting together what will be the next chapter. Thanks again :D

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-06-07

  Well. YOu have my attention, a somewhat rare thing as of late, and I hope this story will hold it. It seems promising, so please continue writing it.

  Author's response

  Thank you! I'm not quitting on this one. Updates may be kind of short due to the fact that I have the attention span of about 15 minutes but I'll try and update as frequently as I can. :)

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) BleedingValentine 2012-06-07

  As mychemicalbithbot said, you DO have my attention. I'm looking forward to the story O.O
  
  BleedingValentine xx

  Author's response

  woop woop!
  
  jumps and claps
  
  Thank you, it was horrible to write this, and the rules are from an actual camp though, I did not make those up.

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) oh_my_mikey_way 2012-06-08

  it sounds like theyre gonna abuse the people there well at least thats the vibe im getting... i'm really lookin forward to this!!

  Author's response

  Im looking forward to writing it :3
  thanks for the reviews!

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) toni_baloni 2012-06-08

  I am looking forward to this story (: can't wait for the next update!

  Author's response

  Thank you, I'll try to have it up by tomorrow. :)

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) xFuRiEx 2012-06-12

  Wow, that's harsh. I agree with oh my mikey way, it does sound like they're going to abuse the people.
  Interesting start.

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-20

  I'm agreeing with the above, unable to speak for the first two days and unable to discuss what they are going through at camp= sounds like some abuse is going to be going down.
  You've got my attention with this introduction. I'm excited to read on!

  Author's response

  Woo! Glad you like it, thanks c:

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) ArgyleSockMonkey 2012-06-23

  You know this is a legit thing, right? I totally just watched a documentary on netflix about this today! It's called "This Is What Love In Action Looks Like". Btw, I totally watched it cuz I'd been following this story:)

  Author's response

  Yea, I had originally gotten the idea myself, but I didn't know anything about operation or their "mission, so I looked them up, trying to make this as realistic as possible.
  
  That's really cool! c:

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) upinflames 2012-08-29

  Dude. DUDE. This is ... well not beautiful since it's such a fucking ugly topic, but it's beautiful since you wrote it from this side of the story. UNF. what the fuck else happened while I was out of Ficwad??? This is GENIUS. like, seriously. Cereally. Cereal. Serial. Serial killer.
  
  [I don't know what the bitch happened back there, but I hope you keep this story in your mind as I catch up. :3 COS YOUR STORY LOOKS PURDY DAMN GOOD FROM HERE. Anyways. ~Love~]
  
  -Azure

• All the Lies in the Books

  (#) Weasel 2012-11-20

  I find it suspicous that they can't tell others what's going on or keep a journal. And THE LOVE IN ACTION YOUTH CAMP THING ISNT IN SERVICE ANYMORE THANK GOD. And did you know that two male derectors of an adult program like this fell in love? I find that awesome.

  Author's response

  I did know that it didn't exist anymore, but I was not aware of the last part. Omg, another frerard xD

Sign up to review this story.