(#) ValentineRevenge 2013-01-06Please update this soon? It's pretty good. And one thing that would help improve it would be a full blank line between the paragraphs, but other than that it's great! :)
Author's responseAha, thanks! I haven't updated this in forever, nor did I plan to, as didn't think anyone was actually reading it. I think though, I may perhaps continue. :)
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