FRERARD! Gerard revisits his old high school before it gets knocked down, only to discover he hasn't left quite as much behind as he'd planned...
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-06-17 02:40:29 PMIf that was tortoise poop, then give me ten buckets full.
This was amazing. I can't believe how real you made this feel, I felt everything he was feeling as I read it. You are a truly talented writer and I love your work.
God, this was amazing, I can't get over it. O.o
- So I'm starting year 11 tomorrow and was supposed to get an 'early night'? But I read this instead! There's no way I can express in words how beautiful this story is! I've actually had it saved on my favourites list for ages and today suddenly remembered I have a ficwad account! But this story is so unique, I get bored of all the usual stuff after a while, the intensity and description here is just amazing! It is by far one of the best frerards I have ever read though on some levels, while the passages about Frank and Gee are amazing (particularly the scene under the birch tree and the ending scene for me) I love how you have explored a little about his past through Mikey, Ray as well as his artwork! I like to imagine you really have captured a small piece of Gerard here. I don't usually cry but after reading this piece around 5 times now there hasn't been once where I hadnt ended up in tears! I was really proud of my self this time around as I lasted up into "Well...you're the exception" before blubbering! Like I said there is no way to put the love I feel for this fanfic into words but i hope I have in some way expressed it here! Sorry for the lengthy review and my first day at school will probably be tiring but it was definitely worth it! Thank you again and I will definitely be reading more of your stuff. Keep on writing, you do it so beautifully!!
(#) FightingForever 2012-11-15 09:40:48 AMThis is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read. The detail is so incredible and its as if i was watching Gerard walking the empty halls. It was just so heartbreaking aswell because i always hoped i had left the chubby girl that nobody paid attention to unless it was to bully behind and i know im still her now. This just helped me accept that. Thank you for writing this amazing piece. I felt so emotional and i was in tears by the end of this, I hope one day i'll be able to write something as beautiful as this. Into the favourites it goes :) xoxo
(#) nerds_assemble 2012-12-01 12:50:51 AMThat was astonishing.
Jeez, it's not tortoise poop.
I don't think I've ever read something that made me feel that way. It was this really weird feeling and I felt like I was living through everything...
Uhm, yeah. That was...wow. I've never gotten overwhelmed like that when I'm reading. That was...wow.
(#) ArsenicAutumn 2013-04-10 08:27:47 AMI know this was written quite a while back but I had to say something. This is a beautiful piece. You made it so incredibly realistic, enough that I could feel everything that the protagonist was feeling. A mixture of pain, nostalgia, and heartache was prevalent throughout this story. I have never cried due to reading anything that is on this site but by the end I nearly couldn't see through my tears. When the protagonist cried, I did and a story has to be pretty stellar for that to happen.
And as someone who graduated from a high school that burned down to the ground 5 years later... it really struck home. I almost feel like I got closure because of this story, as crazy as that might seem. I'd like to say thank you for that. I hope you see this dear author because I would like to ask a favor of you. And that is to NEVER stop writing because I believe you have a real knack for it, and this kind of gift is something that the world really needs right now.
(#) kirziwirzi98 2013-05-16 09:44:53 PMAwesomeness :D
That was fuckin' amazing :) You have deadly writing skills and that was like the most touching fiction I've ever read except it didn't sound like fiction, if you know what I mean It sounded real and life-like :)
Anyway, you're awesome :) Can't wait to read more of your work :)