Just read! not spoiling the chapters!
(#) mrpietan 2012-06-15 11:58:15 PM
Well done. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major, so just a minor nit on my part. I've added you to my alert list. So, please, keep up the posting and while I may not review every chapter, as long as you see me keeping you on my alert list, you'll know I'm still interested. :)
(#) Zucht 2012-06-27 06:55:09 AM
Very good chapter. I liked the Hermione character and Lin also. I'm looking forward to chapter three.
By the way, what happened to Cho's father?
(#) Srtatos 2012-06-28 03:24:08 PM
n1ce work, will be waiting for next chapter :)
(#) fbeast79 2012-06-29 09:10:26 PM
Like the story cant wait to see the revenge on all the bad people
(#) GBTtown 2012-07-04 08:20:09 PM
Nice do-it-over story. I like the beginning chapters and the very creative abuse that Ginny would hit Dumbles with. MoRon is not going to die at this time is my guess. But hopefully soon!
(#) ToddGilliss 2012-07-06 09:49:44 AM
tried giving good points but FW won't let me
original idea presentatin, looking forward to next chaptes
Yes grammatical errors, but that's what makes it fun
(#) stag 2012-07-17 10:01:27 PM
nice work keep it up
(#) farnish1 2012-08-06 11:58:31 AM
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
(#) pjgarlach 2012-08-07 01:15:56 PM
Please continue! It looks to be a great story. I can't wait to see what happens to Ron.
It's a nice and promising story. And there are already actions starting on. Like action against all people making money of Harry's name. Or taking a pro-active stance against coming slander from the Daily Phrofit.
But what about Wormtail? Capturing him wil surely help freeïng Sirius.
Keep up the good work.