Just read! not spoiling the chapters!
Well done. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major, so just a minor nit on my part. I've added you to my alert list. So, please, keep up the posting and while I may not review every chapter, as long as you see me keeping you on my alert list, you'll know I'm still interested. :)
(#) Zucht 2012-06-27
Very good chapter. I liked the Hermione character and Lin also. I'm looking forward to chapter three.
By the way, what happened to Cho's father?
n1ce work, will be waiting for next chapter :)
Like the story cant wait to see the revenge on all the bad people
Nice do-it-over story. I like the beginning chapters and the very creative abuse that Ginny would hit Dumbles with. MoRon is not going to die at this time is my guess. But hopefully soon!
tried giving good points but FW won't let me
original idea presentatin, looking forward to next chaptes
Yes grammatical errors, but that's what makes it fun
(#) stag 2012-07-17
nice work keep it up
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Please continue! It looks to be a great story. I can't wait to see what happens to Ron.
It's a nice and promising story. And there are already actions starting on. Like action against all people making money of Harry's name. Or taking a pro-active stance against coming slander from the Daily Phrofit.
But what about Wormtail? Capturing him wil surely help freeïng Sirius.
Keep up the good work.
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