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Chapter 2
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Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) mrpietan 2012-06-15 11:58:15 PM
Well done. A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major, so just a minor nit on my part. I've added you to my alert list. So, please, keep up the posting and while I may not review every chapter, as long as you see me keeping you on my alert list, you'll know I'm still interested. :) -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) Zucht 2012-06-27 06:55:09 AM
Very good chapter. I liked the Hermione character and Lin also. I'm looking forward to chapter three.
By the way, what happened to Cho's father? -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) Srtatos 2012-06-28 03:24:08 PM
n1ce work, will be waiting for next chapter :) -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) fbeast79 2012-06-29 09:10:26 PM
Like the story cant wait to see the revenge on all the bad people
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Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) GBTtown 2012-07-04 08:20:09 PM
Nice do-it-over story. I like the beginning chapters and the very creative abuse that Ginny would hit Dumbles with. MoRon is not going to die at this time is my guess. But hopefully soon! -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) ToddGilliss 2012-07-06 09:49:44 AM
tried giving good points but FW won't let me
original idea presentatin, looking forward to next chaptes
Yes grammatical errors, but that's what makes it fun -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) farnish1 2012-08-06 11:58:31 AM
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) pjgarlach 2012-08-07 01:15:56 PM
Please continue! It looks to be a great story. I can't wait to see what happens to Ron. -
Harry Potter and the Brand New Life
(#) charleywhite 2012-10-27 09:05:54 AM
It's a nice and promising story. And there are already actions starting on. Like action against all people making money of Harry's name. Or taking a pro-active stance against coming slander from the Daily Phrofit.
But what about Wormtail? Capturing him wil surely help freeïng Sirius.
Keep up the good work.