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Red Balloons and Falling Rain
5 reviewsSunshine and rain. The perfect contradiction. But not as perfect as you thought.
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Red Balloons and Falling Rain
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-18
SAD!!! I'd cry but... I have no tears. I really want to cry Is this half Rydon half Ryan with some girl? Oh this was beautiful!Author's response
Yes. I was going to just write it so that it couldn't be identified with anyone in particular, almost like an OFC, but I think some of Keltie came through unintentionally - the dancing, for instance. But really, it could be anyone.
Thank you so much!Red Balloons and Falling Rain
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-19
Your welcome! I'd figure it was Rydon because the description was really dood and it sounded like Brendon... well you know what I mean when I say sounded right? Because what I mean was it seemed like you were talking about Brendon... oh.. sorry for confusing you!! Ah!!! any ways! it was really good. I loved it. you should write more stories!!!Author's response
No, I understand what you're saying. I would have said so in the description, but I wasn't completely sure if I wanted to add that bit in. Anyway.
Thank you! I will and I am, so I'm sure you'll see more of me in the future.Red Balloons and Falling Rain
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-20
When I said 'dood' I meant 'good'...okay, no need to rush... but update soon! weather it's for this story or a new story! I want to read more! I write a few fics myself but they wont post... =[ but anyway I want you to read one of my fictions just to get your opinion. here it is, it's called Always:
Tears rolled down my cheek as I read the note.
Dear Brenny,
I love you. I honestly do. But I just can't take it anymore.
You always said "When the world gets to heavy, put it on my back, I'll be you leavy" Well I couldn't so much weight on your shoulder's. It was always you falling for me. I can't take this life, this suffering anymore. I'm so sorry you had to put up with me for this long. Don't try and stop me. Because by the time you read this I'll be gone. I'd play a game of Russian Roulette. I will be fun. I guess. I haven't played it right now as I'm writing this. I'm crying as I write this note to you. You fell asleep in my arms and glancing at you every now, and then. Once in awhile you'll scream my name. I don't know what your dreaming about. Your expression is blank. You're so adorable Brenny Bear. Remember when I started calling you that? You got so mad at me. You'd tried for day to get me to stop. But to no avail I didn't. You'll always be my Brenny Bear. I want you to move on. I loved you then, I love you now and I'll love you forever. You;re my soul mate. We'll find each other again. Just not in this life time. So for me, could you move on? Please? You might hate me right now, and might not understand. I hope one day you'll forgive me and understand why I did this unforgiveable sin. Blink back to let me know.
I love you Brenny Bear. I love you Brendon.
-Ryry (George Ryan Ross III)
"I don't hate you, never have never will. I understand I just hope I could've stop you." theres more...
P.S. I left you my jacket you love so much. Blink back to let me know Love you forever, RyryAuthor's response
Yes, I knew what you meant. It will probably be something new; this is only a one shot, and so won't be continued.
Hmm, that's strange. Why won't it upload? Of course - I'd be happy to help!Red Balloons and Falling Rain
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-20
ack! it didn't copy the right way!!! sorry I'll repost it...???
Tears rolled down my cheek as I read the note.
Dear Brenny,
I love you. I honestly do. But I just can't take it anymore.
You always said "When the world gets to heavy, put it on my back, I'll be you leavy" Well I couldn't so much weight on your shoulder's. It was always you falling for me. I can't take this life, this suffering anymore. I'm so sorry you had to put up with me for this long. Don't try and stop me. Because by the time you read this I'll be gone. I'd play a game of Russian Roulette. I will be fun. I guess. I haven't played it right now as I'm writing this. I'm crying as I write this note to you. You fell asleep in my arms and glancing at you every now, and then. Once in awhile you'll scream my name. I don't know what your dreaming about. Your expression is blank. You're so adorable Brenny Bear. Remember when I started calling you that? You got so mad at me. You'd tried for day to get me to stop. But to no avail I didn't. You'll always be my Brenny Bear. I want you to move on. I loved you then, I love you now and I'll love you forever. You;re my soul mate. We'll find each other again. Just not in this life time. So for me, could you move on? Please? You might hate me right now, and might not understand. I hope one day you'll forgive me and understand why I did this unforgiveable sin. Blink back to let me know.
I love you Brenny Bear. I love you Brendon.
-Ryry (George Ryan Ross III)
"I don't hate you, never have never will. I understand I just hope I could've stop you." theres more...
P.S. I left you my jacket you love so much. Blink back to let me know Love you forever, Ryry "I love you too Ryry, I love you too." I silently cried myself to sleep.Author's response
That was good! I could see a few mistakes every now and then, though, so if you would like me to edit it properly for you, email it to: tele_kid_rjb@hotmail.com
That's actually my brother's email address, but he has a new one, so I use that one.Red Balloons and Falling Rain
(#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-06-21
ahh okay, sorry I sent it to you twice, not everything showed up the first time I posted it, and why my stories wont upload is beyond me. I do everythign it asys to upload story but it wont fricken upload!!!
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