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Is The Laughter And Love Worth The Tears And heartbreak

COLLAB-O/C: Bethany Hudson is a 20 year old mother who works in starbucks. Under the laws of witness protection,she has had a rather bad life in Britian and is trying to make it work in LA

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/06/18 - Updated: 2012/06/19 - 1051 words

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• Is The Laughter And Love Worth The Tears And heartbreak

  (#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-18 04:14:41 PM

  This seems like it could be good. It has potential definitely and I could see reading more if you posted, and if you used spell check.
  I really hope this doesn't come off offensively but the spelling is awful. Just in the title, it's 'heartbreak- not heartbrake.'
  The summary: 'Starbucks?' 'witness' 'Britain?'
  Sorry but there are way too many ways to check your spelling online for this to be an issue.
  Good luck with continued writing though and I hope to see more for this story. :)

  Author's response

  Thanks.
  I've fixed the words you pointed out.
  but if you where walking about the spellings in Joshua's speech. Its suppose to be bad. Just saying :)
  
  Talking*

• Is The Laughter And Love Worth The Tears And heartbreak

  (#) Two_19 2012-06-18 08:35:37 PM

  Like it so far. Can't wait to see more!
  
  Scarr :)

• Is The Laughter And Love Worth The Tears And heartbreak

  (#) MissAbbieHudson 2012-06-19 08:30:15 AM

  Love it Hon :D cannot wait for the next chapter :DxoxoxoxoA (L)

• Is The Laughter And Love Worth The Tears And heartbreak

  (#) SimplexMinded 2012-06-20 08:34:51 PM

  this is really awesome! Please updade soon!

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