Lou and Chris have their talk. But does it go as Lou planned?
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-20 03:59:06 AM:) Boys will be boys!
Haha, I can just see that launching talk of who they would turn gay for. That's freakin' awesome lol.
I loved this, especially how moving it was between Chris and Lou. I mean, seriously... when do family issues get resolved so easily? You had the anger first, then the hugging and forgiveness. It was perfect! I could imagine a fight like that.
It was truly touching. I could feel both sides of the argument and that made it so much more moving.
Baseball bat death for Spencer, eh? ;)
Author's responseIndeed, they will be. XD
Yeah, that's why I wrote it! I could totally see that happening in real life... Be interesting to hear their answers! XD Hahah.
Thank you. I was kinda worried about how I'd written it; but I think it turned out okay. :)
Noooo. ;) I'd never have Spencer die by baseball bat. Number 1 - ouch, and number 2 - I could never kill off Spencer! I don't think anyone could! I mean, it's Spencer fuckin' Smith, for crying out loud!
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-06-20 07:15:04 PMMY GOD YAY! SORRY I WAS IMPATIENT BUT I AM HOOKED AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I'm guessing the whole Chris chasing boys off thing was a hint. He'll probably get violent with one of them if they make a move on her! BUT YAY! KEEP WRITING! :D
Author's responseThat's okay. I'm sort of glad you were impatient, if that doesn't sound too egotistical and narcissistic. XD I like it when people like my stuff.
Hahah. I LOVE YOU FOR PUTTING A SMILE ON MY FACE WITH THIS REVIEW! XD
No, Chris doesn't know that Spencer likes her. Yet. I'm sure he'll find out eventually. I'm not sure how I'll make him react though. Probably protective because they're so famous and he doesn't want Lou to get dragged into all of that.
I will! I'm just about to go and start chapter... 17? I think it's 17. Anyway. :D
(#) shortstacklover 2012-06-21 04:55:28 AMAs promised a long review for you!...:
Today I'm talking about my theory on what relationships are actually going on in this story.:
Well to start off with there is TOTALLY incest going on between Lou and Chris. No doubt about that then there is TOTALLY some illegal shit going on between Yankee and brendon. He seemed waaaaaaaay too interested with that dog! (lol that's really gross...) RYDON IS IN THERE CAUSE RYDON IS LIKE OMFG dead EVERYONE LOVES BOY SMEX. K then there's some joncer and Jon is def getting it on with Chris AND the bus driver AT THE SAME TIME!!! Dirty little boy ;) ME AND GABE GET IT ON EVERY FRIDAY, MONDAY'S AND THURSDAY AND RYAN EVERY WEDNESDAY AND SATURDAY AND SUNDAY AND THREESOMES ON TUESDAYS... awkwardly looks around like I said nothingPete and Gabe are having it in the bathroom too. Pete ALSO gets it on with brendon as well. That's why they're such good friends. They're VERY close.... If you get what I'm saying. Ohk Chris' and Lou's parents get it on with the entire family as well. It's like a family icestual orgy. (ewwww where the fuck do I get this from?!?!)
Anyway my theory's on what's really going on in your story.
I love Gabe. Last thing I'm gonna say. GABE HAVE MY BABIES. Ohk now that was. Ok I'm finished. BAIIIIIII
Author's responseAh, geez Sarah. You make me laugh. Keep on dreaming with those pairings in this story. The Yankee/Brendon one made me laugh. What's that? Yandon? Brenkee? XD
Wow. You are so organised with your sexual life. 0.0 I don't know whether to laugh or cry at that information. So I'll just laugh. XD
Wow, whut?! Jon and Chris and the bus driver?! You dirty little girl. XD
... Like I told you: you make it sound like Gabe's the female in you fictional relationship. Anyway... I'm gonna leave you to your fantasies...
(#) XEvil_AngelX 2012-06-29 06:47:03 PMOkay so I get it, Spencer is jealous 'cause his best friend is being nice -nods- I GET IT NOW! But yeah HA nice conversation at the end (RYDON WOULD BE ADORABLE for the record)
Author's responseYep! Quite a bit nice... Okay, yeah, I see where you're coming from with the love triangle theory.
Ha, thanks! I could just imagine them doing something like that in real life.
Ahhhh... My friend Sarah agrees with you (as you can probably tell from her reviews as shortstacklover ;) ), so I'm guessing that there will be a part in chapter 16 that you will both love. I'm sure you'll be able to pick it when we get there. :)