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Summertime
7 ReviewsBrendon's sister moves in with him for the summer. She has to get used to band life. Will she learn things the easy way? I suck at summaries. It's my first story.
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Summertime
(#) Drowning_in_Irony 2012-06-22 12:30:30 AM
Hey, this is pretty good for your first story. I like how you write sarcastically so it's more like the person is actually telling it from their point of view. It makes it more fun to read.
And I'll audition!
Name: Caitlin Mae Wilder
Appearance: long, curly, chocolate brown hair with a side fringe; tall and pale; forest green eyes; a small silver nose stud; slim, but curvy.
Style of Clothing: Pretty laid-back, she's all about jeans, band T-Shirts (FOB, MCR, you know the sorts, and then a random One Direction t-shirt that no one can explain.), she's got practically a collection of hoodies.
Musical Preference: She listens to practically anything from rap (Eminem) to stuff like FOB and PATD to Adele. She does not like country though. Like, at all. She feels like taking a pencil and stabbing herself in the neck when it comes on.
Description of Personality: she's very... Strange. Sarcasm is her best friend, and she is sometimes slow at putting two and two together, but she's aassige ball of sugar-crazed energy. She also tends to ramble, like, a lot.
Hope that does it for ya, and can't wait to read more!
OH, and just a suggestion, you'd probably get a bigger response of auditions if you included the fact your holding them in your summary, I think. :) xx -
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(#) Drowning_in_Irony 2012-06-22 12:33:05 AM
Yeah, my iPod is stupid and like, put "aassige" in there, but that word's supposed to big. Dumb spellcheck -_- -
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(#) MrsWayBeckett 2012-06-22 12:45:12 PM
Thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it! Would it be okay if you were my best friend in the story? you sound like a perfect fit for that! She has a huge crush on Brendon btw. I'm still kinda doing the character development to make the plot and all, but yeah I totally get the country music thing haha I can only tolerate like 2 Taylor Swift songs and that's it. oh and also are you going to be continuing your story? The "Hidden Away" one? I really like it. Not because I'm the main character xD but the plot is really good. :D -
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(#) Drowning_in_Irony 2012-06-22 01:28:36 PM
I'd love to be your best friend, haha! And yeah, I am continuing Hidden Away, I promise, I posted chapter three a while ago, at least I think it was chapter three. I'm starting another story, too, but yeah, that one's still on my to-do list :) -
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(#) Kaleidoscope_Eyes 2012-07-17 06:55:55 AM
Was that a Natalie Portman's Shaved Head reference!? The 'sophisticated sideways ponytail' thing. If so YOU ROCK. If not...I'm super embarrassed...lol Great story though! I'm totally diggin it! :3 -
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(#) MrsWayBeckett 2012-07-18 04:28:02 PM
Yes it was!! :D
They are awesome!
And thank you :) -
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(#) Kaleidoscope_Eyes 2012-07-18 10:12:43 PM
Holy hell I LOVE YOU! I swear, no one knows about them! They totes rock :3