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No One's Listening

Warning:There is cursing envolved and this story is about a boy being picked on so bad that he does something he would regret in the end.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Warnings: [V] [?] - Published: 2012/06/24 - Updated: 2012/06/25 - 642 words - Complete

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• No One's Listening

  (#) ValentineRevenge 2012-06-24 06:46:45 PM

  Alright, this is a fairly decent story, but I noticed a few small issues on this. The action moves a bit too fast, and you could benefit from taking a read over or beta reader. But oterwise, I like the idea behind this, and the general feel of it. Would like to point out however if he shot people in school he probably would've been unable to make it back home. And is the Andy we're talking about here Andy Biersack (Six)?

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