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Sleeping Beauty

Gerard falls asleep and annoys the heck out of Frank. My first fanfic! Oneshot, Fredrard

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2012/06/26 - Updated: 2012/06/27 - 478 words - Complete

Reviews

• Sleeping Beauty

  (#) ColorfulShadow 2012-06-26 07:37:09 PM

  AWWWWWW!!!
  
  I FUCKIN' LOVED THIS!

• Sleeping Beauty

  (#) TheLittleSinner 2012-06-26 08:03:21 PM

  D'aww. This was fucking adorable, bro. My only suggestions are to perhaps work a bit more on formatting the paragraphs, and lengthening it? Cuz I mean, fuck. I definitely want to read more of your stuff.

  Author's response

  Yeah, thanks for reveiwing! My mission is now going to be to find a way to fix the paragraphing, and to expand my one-shots. Thanks!

• Sleeping Beauty

  (#) KelseyChem 2012-06-26 08:45:44 PM

  It was adorable, but the grammar and paragraphing was kinda wonky.
  Cute though ^-^

• Sleeping Beauty

  (#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2012-06-26 11:54:06 PM

  This was really cute, I just wish you had developed it more. The grammar and the way you spaced the story was a little bizarre. xoxo-SM

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