"We are the lost, we are the dead, and we're here to make sure you're aware..." Ryan is being haunted. But by what?
(#) PartyPoison 2012-04-09 10:29:05 AMThis story is marvellous so far! I am so intrigued and really hope you update soon. It's so original and brilliant and just... no words. I will be waiting eagerly for a new chapter!
Author's responseWow, I'm really flattered by this review. I'm a big fan of Send Me Away, and the Broken Bottles backstory, so this means a lot that you reviewed my story.
But I'm sorry to say that this is only a one shot. Apart from having Ryan and Brendon meet, I have no idea how to continue it. Maybe, if I get a plot idea in the future, but as for now, it's complete. Sorry.
- OH MY GERARD! That was astonishing. I think I have fallen in love with this story. Please update soon! I would really appreciate that.
You are an amazing writer, just thought you should know! Don't ever stop writing, or I'll be sad :(
Author's responseThank you so much! You have no idea how much the 'amazing writer' compliment means to me; I LOVE writing, and I hope to be able to do something with it in the future.
And, I'm deeply sorry to say that this is a one shot. It would have said that it my authors note and in the summary.
(#) FrankieXIero 2012-04-09 10:34:57 AMWow. You are so talented, wish I could write like that. This story is now my most favourite and I really hope you update it soon! It's so well written and I haven't seen a story like this around so I am interested to see where the plot goes.
Author's responseThank you! :3 Most favourite? Wow... I'm so glad I was able to achieve that. I'm glad you like it so much; I do too. I really enjoyed writing this.
Again, like I've said before, it's only a one shot, sorry to break it to you.
(#) shortstacklover 2012-04-09 05:14:51 PMOhk here it goes if I can remember what I wrote....
CAN I SERIOUSLY FRAME HIS FACE PLEASEHDJSFKABLSNDINSID?!?!?!! SERIOUSLY NEXT CHAPTER THAT STARS RYAN ON YOUR OTHER ONE YOU MUST PUT MY NOTE SO ONE OF YOUR CHAPTERS GETS RATED HAWWWWWTTTT CAUSE RYAN IS A HAAAWWWWTTTYYYYY !!!
ANYWAY! This story was SUPER GOOD with small pocket sized llamas and toad and bendon and Jon and spencer and Ryan. And you KNOW that's a lot because I do love me some pocket llamas!! The entire story though I couldn't be too scarred because I was thinking LOLZ THIS COULD BE A RYDON (lulz rydon) AND THEN THEY COULD HAVE HOT GHOST SMEX!!!! But seriously that would have been gross cause we all know how gross ghost smex is!!! It's not nice at all...
ANYWAY AS PROMISED A SUUPER LONG REVIEW AND I THINK I PROMISED ANOTHER ONE ON MORE THAN TOU KNOW TOO...
ENJOY READING THIS OVER AND OVER TO TRY ABD MAKE SENSE OF MY RAMBLINGS ABOUT NOTHING IN PARTICULAR
Author's responseHahahahahahahah! I was laughing the whole way through this! XD And I love how you worked the 'lulz, Rydon' thing in there! You get an award for that, my friend.
Yes, I do know how much you like llamas, so I'm glad that this is up their with them. XD Thanks for your super-long review - I look forward to the one on More Than You Know! :D (Oh and with the note thing... Yeah. I gotta actually write a chapter with a lot of Ryan in it for you to be able to do that note. Maybe it'll go up in ch 11? XD Ah, I dunno.)
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-22 03:22:35 AMJust started reading and I'm already astounded with the amount of detail you've put in to this. 'His intelligent brown eyes flickering as they traced hair-thin cracks that were starting to show'- That line was just so incredibly detailed... Love it!
And that was just the beginning of it. All through out this one-shot you amaze me with the detail. You truly did put time and effort in to this and it clearly shows.
His dad is drunk and it's not even 11 PM! Wow. I'm not even that bad. X.x It's so sad how he showers him and gets him in bed. I mean, it's really sweet but... poor guy!
I was glad to read that he wasn't a violent drunk though. I mean, hell I love to build off of that and make drunk people violent but it's so GREAT to read where they aren't violent once in awhile. :p
Oooh, it's past 3 am here so I feel I must clarified what this spooky story was trying to say:
So, phantom Brendon is haunting alive Ryan and Phantom Ryan is haunting alive Brendon?
I know this is a one-shot but so much could be done!
I want alive Brendon and Ryan to meet. I want to know why they are being haunted by their other halves... I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING!
This left so much up in the air but it was sooo good.
I can't believe it took me so freaking long to read.
Author's responseI can't believe it took me so freaking long to respond! XD But that's because I kept squealing every time I saw this... Be prepared for a loooonng reply! :D
Wow, thank you! And that wasn't even one of my favourite lines that I thought were detailed! I can't remember which one it was, but there was one particular line that I loved in there somewhere. Yeah, I really did. I was totally in love with this idea from the start, which is why that I spent ages writing and rewriting sentences, trying to make them sound better. My big obsession was trying to make it creepy enough.
Ha, seriously, I just kinda made up a time for that. I didn't want it to be too late, but then it couldn't be too early. I think originally I had 9pm, but then I was like, 'Dude, no way is he gonna come home drunk THAT early!' and made it a later time. The looking after thing I actually got from the Rolling Stone interview that Panic! did in... '06? '07? I can't remember. But it mentioned how Ryan's dad had died like, a few months ago and that he'd often had to take care of him when he came home drunk. Then later on, Ryan went on to talk about the funeral and how he missed him, and I just couldn't make his dad a violent drunk after reading that. Plus, it's way over done and too cliched. I can send you a link to that particular part in the interview, if you're interested.
Wow, that's late. You didn't have to stay up and read this for me... But it makes me all warm and fuzzy that you did. And yup! You got that spot on! Hah, that's what my friend said when I told her my plan for it.
Well, you'll be happy to hear that I am considering continuing it; for more info, read the Author's Note that I just stuck up.
I don't care how long it took you. I'm just glad that you were able to read it. :3