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"You can't rebuild my rubble." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-03 02:40:48 PMThis does not suck (nor does your usual work. Are you kidding me? Non-bitch please, you know nothing of sucking.) This was really good, no matter how short it was. It was honest and sincere. "I need help and I'm not ashamed to admit it" was probably my favorite line of the whole thing. Most people, myself included, could use help with things but don't want to say it. I loved this, and I'm so glad you're posting on here again!
Author's responseHaha, thanks! I was a little worried about its shortness, so it's good to know the sincerity of it still came through alright.
Thank you very much! :D