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Dreams
23 reviewsArchie finds away that he could win every argument he has with Jay over sailing being a horrible sport. Only he wishes that everything could go back to the way it was, where he lost all of the argu...
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Not So Irrational
(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-08
My crickets and I are now in mourning, we will not review, write, or anything until we see an update for this story, it was SO sad, so now I am hoping and hoping that Atlanta will somehow come to life, or that this is all a sick and twisted dream of Archies, or SOMETHING!! Atlanta can't be dead.
Good bye for now.
crazy_reviewer
and her cricketsAuthor's response
I am afraid that I am going to have to command you to write and review cuz' the others might get mad at me. I am sorry that it is so sad but it will get happier before I am finished.Not So Irrational
(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-08
sniffle sniffle
Ok...I will return...it's just so sad...
wipes away tears so I can review Ok crickets! Lets do the thing we do best!
crickets YEAH!
crickets and I work together to type a review
We really thought it was sad, we are ussually used to the death of Archie sniffle we just need to get used to it being Atlanta dying, it was beautifully written, and we also know that if Atlanta does not return to life, Archie and her will be reunited in the Elysian Fields, where all heroes go.
We also have one little problem, if authors keep killing off characters, HOW THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO DEFEAT/CAPTURE CRONUS?!?! That is always something that gets me! Think people, if someone dies, you have condemmened everyone else to DEATH!!
See you all in the Elysian Fields!
I am sorry if the crickets and I seem a little...what word would that be?...tense?...nervous?...enraged?
We really like your story and we hope you update soon!
the reviewer formerly known as Prince- I mean
the reviewer CURRENTLY known as Prin- NO!
the reviewer currenlty known as crazy_reviewer
(and her crickets)Author's response
Oh you have spotted one of the parts of my plot (The part that if someone dies the others are being condemmened to death.) Well that problem will be solved dont worry.Not So Irrational
(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-08
calm breaths
to summarize my last review.
1 Love your story
2 Beautifully written
3 Used to others dying
4 Sad...
5 Please update soon!Author's response
Well to anwser your last review:
1) Glad you love (wait did you type LOVE) it
2) Glad that it is well writen
3) I know, I wanted to at least be mildly origanl
4) I know I know, I cried while writing it, but I have a really good plot (in my opinion) in mind
5) I will tryNot So Irrational
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-07-08
I loved it. It was very good.Author's response
High praise! Glad you liked it!Not So Irrational
(#) Dessmonda 2006-07-08
This was really well written. I loved the water fight, it was awesome and everyone was in character. The ending was so sad, I can't believe that Atlanta’s dead...poor Archie comforts Archie. Can't wait for you to continue this is awesome!Author's response
Aww thanks! I am so glad that everyone is in character! I loved writing the water fight scean, I will try and update soon!Not So Irrational
(#) Justforstories 2006-07-09
It was so sad that Atlanta... sob. Please keep writing though, it was really good.Author's response
Glad you like it, I know its sad but it will have its happy moments.Not So Irrational
(#) Busterdog282 2006-07-09
WOW IT WAS GOOD AND SADAuthor's response
Glad it was good!Not So Irrational
(#) Busterdog282 2006-07-09
if you want to know my story Atlanta in TROBLE is updated CHAPTER 3Author's response
sweet
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