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Torn
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(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-07 11:56:18 PM
I honestly don't think I can fully express how this story made me feel because this just left me incoherent. That's a good thing by the way. It was just so beautiful and heartbreaking and moving and all those wonderful things. You really are an amazing writer; be proud of your skill. As for a rating out of 10? 11. Just because. :)
Oh, I don't know if you already knew, but since you liked the original thing, I thought I'd tell you that there's a new part to my story 'Phantoms.' I have indeed decided to continue it.
Anyway, this was just amazing and I look forward to reading the next piece you post! :) -
Torn
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-07-12 02:49:49 PM
This is extremely well-written and interesting to read. I like how simple it is, yet at the same time it feels like I'm right inside his head and can clearly understand all of the emotion. Of which there is a lot.
Fantastic, beautiful job! :D