(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-07-20I've just found this story and I love the entire thing so far! I feel so sorry for Ryan, but at the same time I understand why Brendon is being the way he is; Ryan left him, after all. You write really well and the whole thing so far has been an absolute pleasure to read.
Can't wait for part four! :D
(#) PartyPoison 2012-07-20This is wonderful and I am really enjoying it so far. You are a good writer and you should be proud of what you've done so far. I like how you write Ryan's character in this story along with the flashbacks to his memmories with Brendon. Plus making Brendon refuse Ryan was something refreshing.
I will be waiting impatiently for the next part.
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