(#) CosmicZombie 2012-08-04The way you described pain in the first several paragraphs...My God. That's exactly how I feel. You described pain just brilliantly, and despite the darkness of it, I think you made it sound almost beautiful, in a twisted sort of way. The way your protagonist didn't want people to be sympathetic or fake added to the raw, realness of the story, because that's the kind of way you do feel when you've been inflicted with that amount of pain. I think this way really, really good, and it made me quite emotional while reading it.
Thank you so much for posting, you should be very proud of this.
Author's responseThank you so much. I worked hard on this little oneshot, I'm so glad that you like it xx
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