Darren receives an unexpected email from Daniel inviting him to come and stay for a few days.
- So beautiful...the perfect happily-ever-after ending for these two, if they were ever meant to be a couple. And in your story, they surely are. This was such satisfying piece of fantasy-fulfilment.
Author's responseThanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's my first real attempt, so appreciate any feedback.
(#) GothicLolita 2005-06-02 06:22:03 AMWow, what a fantastic story. Somehow you managed to turn a classic storyline into something new and fresh. The words you used and the way you made the characters speak seemed very believable and in character, which is a very good thing. A lot of people fail to turn Darren and Daniel into believable characters, but you managed to do so, and extremely well at that. Also, it's nice to see a new writer who actually seems to care about writing. There are so many bad stories with horribly bad grammar and badly written plots and characters in this fandom these days, so believe me what I say this story is like a fresh breeze on a hot summer's day :D
Author's responseThank you very much Stine, I really appreciate feedback from people like yourself as I've been reading your stuff for years. I just hope I can come up with another now.
(#) GothicLolita 2005-06-02 06:46:20 AMI forgot to add that the perfectionist in me almost had an orgasm while reading this story. You've obviously done your research, so thank you for that :P
Author's responseI didn't really need to research as I read anything I can find about Darren, fact and fiction. I'm surprised I don't confuse the two at times.
- A wonderfully beautiful story. Great job. I absolutely loved this.
I did notice one tiny error:
Darren's mouth went try. (I think you meant dry here?)
Author's responseOops thanks for pointing that out...I've fixed it now. Thanks for your response Linda, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
(#) Rose_Angel 2005-06-02 07:59:47 AMThis was a great story. At first I was a little concerned with how emotional Dan was, so unlike him, but I soon got used to it.
Wonderful job. xo Rose Angel
Author's responseThanks so much. The fact that Daniel was so emotional was what was so concerning and confusing to Darren also :)
- Omigawd! That was. . .brilliant! Beyond words! Wow. Really. . wow. I could feel it and it seemed so truthful - WOW! You painted quite the picture.
Author's responseThankyou Mandy, I really appreciate your review. Oh boy, everyone has given such wonderful reviews, I'm a bit scared about posting another fic.