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9- Caught In The Act
4 ReviewsRyan’s mouth fell open, his attention snapping to me.
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(#) XEvil_AngelX 2012-07-25 08:07:17 PM
oh shiiiiiiit drama O.oAuthor's response
Lots, and lots!
Thanks for the feedback. :D I was excited to get so much for this chapter! -
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(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-25 10:49:22 PM
HOLY MOTHER FUCKING SHIT!
Getting caught twice! Wow... This just... How could you... That's not.... ARGH!!!
I hated how just cause she didn't say anything in the last chapter Ryan automatically just went to a party, got drunk and tried to get with a random girl - her best friend! I get that he might have wanted to forget, but really. Being sleazy is not cool. And I can only imagine what's gonna happen at school because of the fact that someone saw him kiss her, even though she punched him and pushed him off. sing song voice DRAH-MAHHHH!!
AND THEN THEIR DAD! Oh shit, there in trouble. I mean, Ryan can't just turn around and say, "Sorry Dad; I tripped and my tongue ended up accidentally falling down her throat," can he? Ugh, I would not like to be in their shoes...
And PLEASE update as soon as you can. :) I am desperate to find out what happens next.Author's response
Haha. :D
Yes, very terrible plan which backfired to a small extent! It's not cool, I agree wholeheartedly. Unfortunately, not everyone is cool enough to not be sleazy in a moment of tragedy. ;)
lol, I wouldn't either. It will be the most drama I've ever written, and not easy to get out of... that's for sure!
I will! :) I really hope you like the next update, and thanks so much for yet another awesome review! -
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(#) MrsWayBeckett 2012-07-26 10:57:00 PM
Oh my god!!
Update please!! I can't believe the drama that is about to happen!! Gaahh I love this story!Author's response
:D Haha, thank you so much!