Jack and Elizabeth have a brief heart-to-heart.
Minor spoiler concerning the compass that doesn't point North. Set post-"Dead Man's Chest"
(#) whatsername 2006-07-17 09:38:39 PM
Very well written story. I liked it! Good job.
(#) herk444 2006-07-20 05:33:08 AM
loved the beginning very much. The detail of when he was baithing and all of that was awsome. Hehe.. calogne...
The whole "uncle Jack" thing kinda bothered me towards the end, but brilliant description of how Jack took off his rings and put them on his chest, i dunno. I'm just very detail oriented I guess.
I like this. Very much so. Espectially your description of the bath--nothing explicit, and definitely something to laugh about. I'm sure Jack just got cleaner than he's been in ages.
A well thought out story.
(#) Squeegee 2006-08-14 06:39:55 PM
Ah! Wonderful job!
The whole bathroom scene was uber entertaining and the rest of it just made me wanna pull a rabid fangirl. XDD I found it cute.
Yer eye for detail is excellent and the conversation in the story actually felt normal, not forced like some fics. ^^ Kudos!
i loved it. it was a cute little post DMC. It's the happy ending everyone wants to see, will and elizabeth together and "uncle" jack right beside them. great story
(#) redcirce 2006-09-01 02:25:09 AM
Loved this. The cologne, the explanation of the "uncle jack" the dissection of the jack/elizabeth relationship- all great.
(#) RapunzelK 2009-12-22 07:33:33 PM
It's no longer valid canonically, but I'm still rather proud of this piece. I like taking Jack out of his Pirate guise and looking at him as a Person.