WARNING - This chapter could be a SEVERE trigger for anyone who cuts. READ WITH CAUTION.
- I'm so glad I found this amazing piece of work. This chapter was strangely beautiful. Keep up the awesome. Also I'm delighted to see another chapter over there. Very cool. I love everything about this story.
Your grammar and spelling is good for the most part. But it'd be easier for people to read if you space the chapter into a few paragraphs and not just completely pieced together. Consider that. On to Chapter Five... WHOOP!