One shouldn't be allowed to be that pretty. No. I wouldn't allow it.
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-06 07:28:08 PMDid he... Did he KILL him?! O_____o i did not expect that from the title XD
That said, i really liked it. The way you described him was very detailed and described his beauty accurately :P
Author's responseNooo, he's not dead. I read it over and it does sound like he killed him huh? xD
The little incident with Frankie boy just made him introverted and scared anddd- I think I'll just make this a storylike thingy so I can explain everything. This should be fun! :'D
Misleading titles rule! Luring you in with cuteness, then throwing acid in your face. It's weirdly fun.
I'm glad you liked it though. It really means a lot, seeing as I effin love your writing. No joke, NPSST is on my phone's bookmarks :P
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-07 03:14:20 AMYAY!!! There's gonna be more? This will make an awesome story, ill be sure to read it! Thankyou for saying that about my writing, it makes me feel all squishy inside! le thankyou
I can't wait for the next installment...
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-08-07 03:53:05 AMOh, please PLEASE tell me that there will be more. I need more! This is fantastic... just perfect. I'm craving more. Oh, please?
Author's responseI've been meaning to reply to these for ages. Silly me forgot. Sorry, I get distracted easily. :P
And I can tell you, there will be more! As soon as my brain can think of where I want this to go. :D
Thanks a bunch, it means a lot. c:
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-08-18 07:28:33 AMthat's horrible! the poor kid! what a selfish, evil, jealous prick!
yes, brilliantly written. starts off pretty nice and lighthearted and then suddenly chilling. keep going!
Author's responseI knooow, what a fuckass.
Yes C'pn. As soon as I find a direction for this story, we'll set sail. :P
(#) SyraStrange 2013-05-27 10:21:06 AMDUDE. DUDE! I TOTALLY RATED THIS AND FORGOT TO REVIEW, WHAT THE FUCK? I COULD'VE SWORN—?
Insane, fucked up, and descriptive, you, my friend, are playing up all my sweet spots. Dang. That's pretty rad.
Author's responseyou're pretty rad. thank you.