Categories > Cartoons > Delilah and Julius > Tomorrow
Tomorrow
4 ReviewsJulius is on his deathbed. He only asks Delilah for one last favor.
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Tomorrow
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-12 06:39:48 AM
Ok it was good, but truthfully not your best. But it was origanal and alright. Keep writing.Author's response
Hmm do you have any ideas of where can I improve? Thanks for reviewing!
xxDarkness' Kidxx