The aftermath of Brendon's little set-up attempt.
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-08-15 01:31:30 AMMoar! Moar! I swear, I'm gonna hire you, and some other writers to write for me one day. XD
Author's responseHaha. If you want to give me prompts, you can. It just might take a while for me to write something with all the shit I've got going on at the moment. :) But yeah. Feel free to give me prompts anytime.
(#) XEvil_AngelX 2012-08-15 08:58:27 AMSpencer's a lesbian? WTF? I died when I read that, it was awsome.....moar WOMAN! (please tell me your a woman and I did not just insult a guy by calling him a woman)..anyway loved it; and Brendon the littl- noo Ryan's bitch :P
Author's responseHaha, yeah, I had to make shit up for that part. It's basically based on the lesbian hairdo thing, and then Brendon's always portrayed as the immature, bouncy, hyper one, and the one about Ryan is basically what my sister thinks about him. She has t exactly said that much with words, but I know she thinks it. (Her new name for 'gay' is 'rosevest' - no matter how many times I tell her it was a costume! - and she'll often say things like, "That's so rosevest!", where 'rosevest' replaces the word 'gay.')
Haha, I'm a woman (girl) so don't worry. Although, I do get called a guy by my friends sometimes as a joke. The whole tom-boy thing, I guess.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-08-15 09:48:29 AMI felt a little bad for Ben honestly. It's not his fault that his sister is a bitch, and says things because she wishes she was Lou. Ugh, freaking jealousy. It's a curse upon us all. Then again I don't think I've ever been jealous enough to be that much of a bitch. Fingers crossed- hope it doesn't ever happen, but you know, I'm just human.
Freaking Brendon! Is there a reason he's moody? Is it because of the Ben thing? Or just random mood swing from hell?
Aww, Spencer almost called her cute! That was so realistic! I can see how it would be so overthought, you know? It was just written perfectly!
And Spencer hugged her! And scooted closer to her!
I'm pretty much sitting here, staring at the screen- trying to find more, because I'm insane like that. Products of my imagination are dancing all over this as I envision Lou and Spencer together.
I.am.in.love.with.this.story. Did I tell you that already? It needs to be said again.
Author's responseI know, I do too! No one else does though. Yeah, jealousy sucks. But it's such a useful tool for writers to weave into plot lines! XD
Yeah, there is a reason that will be explained in the next chapter. I didn't want to write it in there, cause of the whole Ryan thing, but it just ended up happening, for some reason.
I know! I thought it was about time he grew a pair and made a move (however small it was). Thanks, I was really worried about that part, but I'm glad you think it turned out well.
Hahah. You shouldn't have to wait too much longer. There's not much of the plot that I haven't written, but it will take a few chapters. Five or six maybe. Then it will be over, I'm sad to say. :(
Yes, you have. Many times. I.Am.In.Love.With.You.For.Saying.That. Just so you know. I love getting your reviews, and it does wonderful things to my ego to hear you say things like that. :3