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Frerard - Why I love you
(#) tdeeley 2012-08-15
this is incredibly emotional! i really think you should take the father rape part out though i found it really disturbing but other than that i found it amazing and i literally read every single chapter in one night i couldnt stop :) ive only just finished at 3:30am and i started reading at 10:45pm haha I've never cried at a story so much in my entire life! absolutely devastate about frankie and gee though hope they get back together in the end :)Author's response
Thank you for reviewing. I'm sorry you found the rape scene distrubing but I think that was the emotion I was trying to acheive through it. I hope that hasn't tainted your view on this too much though :)Frerard - Why I love you
(#) Whovian-lily404 2012-08-16
Half-way through here, i teared up majorly. This IS the best chapter yet, and I personally can see this as an ending for your fic, as a "tearaway".
Umm, i honestly caot think of how you can improve... Just keep up the fantastic work! :D
L.S.E
XOXOAuthor's response
Thank you for reviewing! Have more ideas for the end of the story but I did also feel like this as an end could have worked. Unfortunatly I am very soppy and need to make the ending at least vaguely happy. Hope you will read on to find out how the story ends though :)Frerard - Why I love you
(#) imakilljoywannabe 2012-08-16
Your writing is truly amazing, I always love reading it! :)
The only thing I would want in this story is just for there to be some happy parts. It seems that everything is just so sad. While I realize it's probably supposed to be like that, I'd love for them (Gee and Frankie) to get together again at the end or something else that makes them both happy... But you write the story! I'm just one reader and I love fluff so don't weigh that opinion too heavily you should end it how you want :) I'll read it until it's over no matter what you decide! :D
Update soon!Author's response
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad of any kind of review so thank you for a different opinion :)
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