Basically, this is my first EVER smut. It's set around christmas for some bizaree reason. And even if it only got two reviews and they were both saying it was bad, it would literally make my day xD
(#) EffigyQueen 2012-08-18 12:12:36 PMCapital letters and some punctuation wouldn't hurt, besides it's more pleasurable to read.
Except for that, quite okay. Keep going.
Author's responseThanks for being honest :)
And I know, but I write it in notepad because I don't have Microsoft or what have you, so there's no auto correct, but i'll look more into it next time :)
- At home sick with the flu and reading this. Oh my goodness, this is freaking AMAZING!!!! Definately best Frerard I've read! Omg its just "Aaaaaah!" Ya know? So freaking sweet! Okay, I'm going to stop rambling now.....SO AWESOME. Okay, NOW I'm done :)