Gerard is a ninja. Frank is an assassin. They're mortal enemies. Pirates and Templars are involved.
- Well damn. The only piece I wrote of this voted down to cliche, didn't know it was that bad :(. Oh well, good luck with this. I told you my ideas were trash though.
Author's responseNo it's good. I think it's just cause I have a bad rep on this site and not because anyone read it and I haven't really redeemed myself because I'm a 'silent reader' most of the time. Thanks for letting me use it, it really got my creative juices flowing again. I know this story is going in a completely different direction than yours but maybe we could do a spinoff of both and merge our ideas together. Do a little collab? Yes?
(#) ColorfulShadow 2012-08-22 05:56:07 PMHey. I know before I was a bitch, and I'm sorry about that, but I have an idea you can use.
Make it where all of the guys are playing a video game like Mortal Kombat or Call of Duty. And there is like a forbidden level. So they go on the level and the next thing they know, they actually end up in the game.
Good idea? Use it if you like.
And I don't know why this is rated down. I enjoyed it.
Can't wait to see more of your writing.
Author's responseI might totally do that!