I need some help with your story line. If she doesn't get back, you people looking at this are welcome to attempt in aiding me as well.
Now, the reason I'm making this lovely little note is that I need some help with your story line. All you put was, and I quote: "Goes to a MCR concert only to end up getting kidnapped by the band."
There's nothing wrong with that, but there's no other details. A bit ambiguous if you ask me. I'm a tad bit at a loss on how to proceed after she gets kidnapped. Is it some kind of joke? Are they serious and holding her for ransom? Are they friends and it's just a prank? Do they murder her?
No sexual themes please. I blush at dirty jokes, I cannot handle writing anything raunchy.
I would just love Gerardsvictim22's input, or anyone that believes they can aid me in my quest.
Thank you all,