'Frank doesn’t say any of what he’s thinking either as he goes and sits on the couch, right in the centre, in Gerard’s living room'
- I loved it.
Through most of the chapter I was all giddy and happy
I'd like pause reading this amazingness to fangirl
But at least Frankie was with him
Author's responseThank you so so much!
Haha I'm super glad you enjoyed it!
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-22 03:10:23 PMWhy in fucks name do you hate this? Its amazing.
Its a really good.mix of mushiness and emotional bits. You made me feel all flaily and giddy one moment and then extremely teary the next.
Poor Mrs harte. Its sad that she had no family to see her before she died "/
You should be incredibly proud of this chapter because its fuckin awesome. Like on epic proportions.
I can't wait for the next update, this story is awesome. :)
Author's response:O Oh you'l make me blush, stop!
Thank you so much! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long this time
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-08-23 09:54:56 AMWhaaaaat? Why would you hate it? This was beautiful and sad and romantic and tragic and comic and I think I just used up all my movie genres. And you wrote it so well, not cheesey at all which is what I would do totally just turn it into gorganzola and spread it on a cracker.
Oh, and this bit: "Actually, I want to kiss more than your face, if we’re being honest but I think this chapter is rated PG13 so maybe not right now" XD funny stuff, dude.
Update as soon as you can, now my boys are together waiting is no longer an option!!
Author's responseBlarrrr idk it just hadnt been coming together as well as I'd of liked it to but super glad you enjoyed it!
Eheheheh I'll reply more when I'm not on a phone but thannnkkkk youuuuu
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-08-27 11:31:38 AMThis chapter was sho shveet it made me all warm and fuzzy inside but then when Mrs Harte dies I just felt so so sad because that lady was a total babe and aaaawwww
But yeah, you should totes like love this chapter as much as i do because it rocks and THEY KISSED AND THEY'RE HAPPY TOGETHER AND YAY YAY YAY ISSA HAPPY TIMES
but now i know that there's going to be some stupid climax because duh which means happiness isn't going to stay for much longer and this is the longest review ever
Author's responseWhy have I just not replied to you?
Thank you! She's like based on one of my old teachers mixed with my step nan but neither of them are dead.
Climax climax climax