“Run,” he whispered wildly, desperately, skin ghost-like, almost transparent in the dank, misty light of the forest.
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-08-30 12:49:56 AMYeah yeah yeah first review whooo
Don't you even THINK about ditching this baby. Listen, all your other stuff I've read is great, right? Cute and romantic and funny and fluffy but /this/, this is pure gold. Scrap that, this is like, the oil that they found buried deep under Saudi Arabia all those years ago that started all those problems. It's deep and intelligent and absolutely beautiful to read. Plus every chapter just keeps getting better and better.
When I read this I feel kinda like I'm watching some kind of gothic movie on the big screen and it's snowing outside but it's waaaarm in the cinema. And I loves them gothic movies! If you end this it will be a tragedy.
You've seriously outdone yourself with this one. It's the best thing you've ever written. To be said in cheesy cowboy voice: "There aint no reigns on this one."
Author's responseDuuude, thank you so much, your review literally made me smile ridiculously much. I'm so pleased you like it, and what you said means a whole lot to hear. I really appreciate your constant support on it...Thank you.
P.S. I really hope this story is less troublesome than the oil under Saudi Arabia.
(#) Alexandra_Day 2012-08-30 12:58:59 AMGaa PLEASE KEEP GOING! Dammit I love this story so much! Just continue for now, you can always go back and re-write it later. You are wonderful :)
Author's responseThank you! Yeah, that's a good point...I'm so pleased you like it, and thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot (:
(#) Baldylocks 2012-08-30 01:30:25 AMDefinitely continue with the story. If you feel, once you have finished it, that you're not satisfied with how your plot and characters have developed, re-write it, but try experimenting with this first draft first, because that's the fun part! I really like the plot, and how you describe everything the characters see and don't see. I really, really hope you continue with it, because, to be honest, Gerard and Frank have met properly, they're on the run, and you're going to leave us hanging? Unacceptable :L
(#) MCRkilljoy 2012-08-30 02:39:14 AMSWEET JESUS CONTINUE IT!!
I'm so glad they've finally met now :D it's amazing how you make this story so real, so alive. It felt as if I was in the story. They way you write makes it so easy to place yourself in the scene and be completely swallowed by the plot.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)
(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2012-08-30 02:48:29 AMHey!
Sorry for not leaving a review before, I've only just gotten around to reading it with moving and everything. But I'm really enjoying it, and it's amazing the way it is, there's really no need to re-write it in my opinion. It is ultimately up to you, but please don't stop writing it :)
It would be a real shame to stop in the middle of such a good story!
Can't wait for the next chapter! xox
(#) SerenityInSilence 2012-08-30 03:47:44 AMHey, this story is really awesome. You can do whatever you want with it, because it's yours, but I really think you should continue it. To be honest, you're one of my favorite writers, and I would be sad to see this work of art unfinished.