How is Lou going to get herself out of this situation? And the moment we've all been waiting for... Spencer makes a move!!!!
(#) Heymimusic 2012-09-12 11:17:17 PMI haven't reviewed this at every update. I feel so disappointed by myself... Anyways, back.
Yay!! YOU GO SPENCER FOR MANNING UP AND ASKING HER OUT TO WALK AROUND VEGAS! This just get's cuter and cuter that I feel like my veins are pumping rainbows and fairy dust.
But hey, what can I say? I'm a Loser for Loucer (that was a really bad pun xD) :D
I would say Travie McCoy, but that would break my heart... So no, I'm not saying that it's him. This is hard because all of the people that fit that description that I can think of are so nice D:
Lucky, I wish I could go on a trip to Italy -.-" but have fun! :D
Author's responseAw, it's okay. You're reviewing now; that's what counts. :)
Haha - about time, huh? XD And I thought that I could t write fluff for shit. Guess I've been proved wrong. :P
Yeah, it was, but it was appreciated nonetheless. :)
TRAVIE! I forgot about him. :( So no, it's not Travie. It was a really bad description of the person, I'm sorry, and what happened probably doesn't even fit with how he's normally portrayed but hey. Let's all take a moment to embrace the fictional aspect of this story. XD
Thanks, I'll try to! :D
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-09-13 08:36:57 AMI'm guessing it's Gabe. I'm curious to find out if he freaking apologizes to her or gets his ass kicked... or what happens to him, because SOMETHING has to happen.
Yes! Spencer asked her on a date! Aw. That is AWESOME! Now I'm excited for their alone time, because they seriously need some alone time.
Then the kiss on the forehead. That was so sweet and perfect, because making a stronger move than that after what she went through would be disturbing.
Also, I love how he let her sleep in his bunk. That's really sweet.
This entire chapter is really sweet.
Now I want some anger.
And some revenge for what happened to her.
Or at least an APOLOGY!
Have fun in Italy. Sheesh. That seems forever away. I'm going to just start sulking right now. X.x
Author's responseActually, it was originally going to be Gabe, but then my friend Sarah wanted to be his girlfriend, and so I didn't think that would work. But you're close though. Kinda. Well, you'll find out in the next chapter. Ryan will probably discuss it with Spencer or something. I'm thinking of setting Greta or Vicky onto him. XD
I know! It's about time, huh? She just doesn't know that it's a date yet. Sheltered life, remember. She just thinks they're gonna hang out as friends. Haha, yes, they probably do. Don't worry, they will get some alone time soon. ;)
Ah, yes, that. That was just a spur-ofthe-moment thing, I tell you. I hadn't planned for it at all, but eh. It snuck in somehow. I know, I wanted him to make a move, but I didn't want him to come on too strongly.
That was planned. I knew that that would happen from the start. And of course, it was his turn to let her sleep there anyway; all the others had already had their turns.
Aww, thanks. Ehh... Next chapter might have some. I don't know. I have a brief list of events in my head, but I just need to fill the gaps and bulk it out. But don't worry, he'll get what he deserves for doing that to Lou.
I'll try to! :) I'm getting billeted out for three nights to an Italian family and everything! They have a son my age who I'm gonna go to school with and stuff. Should be fun. :)
Thanks for reviewing!
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-10-14 01:42:01 PMSo I'm dying to know... How was your trip? And the son your age? Was he cute? He had to be cute.
Author's responseHaha. My trip was good! ... Once I made some new friends with three other girls who were on it; none of my friends came with me. :(
I'll email you a picture if you want? He was sooo TALL! And really skinny too. And he had a mohawk. XD I'm thinking of maybe posting a little something about my trip in the AN at the end of next chapter, or maybe just post something in the original section about it if people want to know about it.
Um um ummmmm
CAN I HAVE YOUR BABIES OH MY FUCKING GOD PLEASE LET ME HAVE THEM
Hi, um, I'm Mirazal. I kinda found out about this story today from XxPerfectTomorrowxX and I read the entire thing so far and I can't describe my love for it.
No words. No words. -crosses arms-
You write your characters extremely well and realistically, and all of the events of the story are really vivid in my head. So yeah. I love this. I love you. I love Ryan Ross.
My guess is William Beckett. Idk I just have a feeling.
So. I understand that you just got back from a trip but PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I LOVE YOUUUUUU
Author's responseHAhahahahah! XD Alright relents You're welcome to them. ;)
Welcome on board the Loucer ship, my friend. My name is Mezza, and I will be your captain... XD
Thank you so much; your praise has just made me feel unbelievably talented and amazing. I'm glad you can imagine the events vividly; that means I've been able to pass on my own imagination of them.
Well, you're the closest so far, I'll give you that but... mimes zipping lips and throwing the key away I ain't gonna say anything more! ;)
I'll try, I promise!(How could I not when I get amazing reviews like this one? :3)
- OMG IS IT MIKEYWAY
IT TOTALLY MIGHT BE
HE IS TALL AND SKINNY
I LOVE MIKEY THOUGH
I love Mikey
No, it's definitely not Mikey Way. I didn't even plan for MCR to be at Pete's party, and besides, that would be really out of character for how I imagine Mikey to be like.
If I were you, I'd stick with your guess of William.