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How's Hot Now?

"How’s it feel not to be real?" Feedback hugely appreciated. :)

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/09/20 - Updated: 2012/09/20 - 226 words - Complete

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• How's Hot Now?

  (#) PartyPoisen 2012-09-21 03:34:18 PM

  I wont lie. This was really confusing cause I didnt understand what it was about. It sorta felt like it was a romance poem about a guy backing a girls and her leaving him and he gets mad that she left him even though he was the one who m screwed up by betraying her and she is telling him to back off cause he is the one who screwed up. All she did was walk away from the hurt and that the relationship was toxic to her.

  Author's response

  I appreciate your honesty. I like your interpretation of it, but I was kinda going for something anti-society style. It doesn't really make much sense to me either, but I kinda felt like I had to write it, y'know?
  
  Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

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